http://val000.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] val000.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] gennadydobr 2017-02-27 05:31 pm (UTC)

Прочёл.
Задумано классно. Есть шероховатости, но главная - нужно бы пораньше объяснить про крыс-мышей. Очень уж долго непонятно почему ты их путаешь.
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